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Prissy
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« Reply #160 on: September 30, 2007, 02:42:03 PM »

American Idol Rewind has now started AI 2 this season.  One of my favorite Clay AI 2 appearances was when he sang GREASE.  Here is my poem about that fabulous time.




THOSE AIKEN SHAKIN' HIPS

Familiar strains of "Grease" we hear
And then 'our idol' does appear.
He's grinning, moving to the beat!
(Did someone just turn up the heat?)

His jacket is a shade of red
That makes mean Simon lose his head!
And also red are his big shoes!
(Did someone just light up my fuse?)

His long lean legs in snug blue jeans
That fit just right do cause loud screams!
For Clay this audience has flipped!
(Did he just shake those Aiken hips?)

He sounds so clear and sings so well,
His voice does cause each heart to swell!
The BeeGees could not be more proud!
(Did those hips jerk and wow that crowd?)

Is this our Clay, our sweet man/boy?
With sexy looks that say, "Don't toy!
I'm not the innocent you think!"
(Did his hips move, or did I blink?)

"Clay, you can't dance!" the judges say.
They make no sense, try as they may!
"Just horrible!" says mean Simon
(When those hips shift, isn't it fun?)

Oh, Simon, Randy, Paula, too,
You guys don't even have a clue
That this performance is first rate!
(And by the way, aren't those hips great?)

We love each facet of you, Clay,
That spikey hair, that handsome face,
Those gorgeous eyes, those luscious lips!
(And, yes, those Aiken Shakin' Hips!!!)









                             

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« Reply #161 on: October 15, 2007, 05:18:08 PM »

Prissy~
I loveeeee "Those Aiken Shakin' Hips" its sooo cute =]

Everyone~
I gave up on Mr. Jonathan Pyo, he doen't love me and never will; however, I now have a boyfriend named Mr. Steve Rymal who adores me (and vice versa)~yay <3

~yuki
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« Reply #162 on: October 25, 2007, 02:54:08 PM »

my steve is a car salesman for dodge, so i wrote him a theme song~lol  Laughing
it's to the tune of the spiderman theme song~k?

Dodge man, dodge man
Sells cars like no one can
Neons, magnums and caravans too
Dodge man will help you find the one that's right for you!

~yuki
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claytonsmyccf
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« Reply #163 on: November 13, 2007, 03:32:16 PM »

hey guys it's the depressing one lmao Thought I'd pop in. Just stopped by to see and re-save my poems on my laptop. I'm going to a poetry reading tonight.  :paraI'm not sure if I'm going to read our not since -- well it scares the crap out of me thinking of reading my stuff in front of people. But anyways great job as usual!!!! bigsmile

Here's a new one I can share no title but the date Laughing

November 5th 2007
Sometimes I feel small
I’m going to lose it all
Traveling down a path that’s dark
I’ll never find a way out
I’ll scream all I want
I’ll try to run away the tears and fears
I’ll cry out to you
I know they’ll be no response
I need something
Someone I don’t yet know
When will I know them
It feels like I’m nothing to society
I have a set out plan
But its sure to fail
No matter how I try nothing going to turn out right
I’ll cry and cry and cry
But nothing will come of it.



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« Reply #164 on: November 15, 2007, 08:05:59 PM »

Claytonsmyccf~ u need to cheer up a bit woman~lol =P you express your feelings quite well though

Everyone~ you guys need to come in more often
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« Reply #165 on: January 18, 2008, 08:28:59 PM »

no one ever comes in here *sob* i don't have any poetry at the moment, but inspiration shall come soon ;)
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« Reply #166 on: January 18, 2008, 10:37:11 PM »

I think people do come here, but mostly just to read.... in fact, I followed you in here to see if you had written something new!  Smile

Oh inspiration....wherefore art thou?
Hiding from me like a child at play,
Perhaps to show yourself another day?


Hee!

PS - Mr. Pyo's loss yukino.... Wink

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Prissy
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« Reply #167 on: January 19, 2008, 03:23:34 PM »

Yukino,

I have not been here in a while.  I'm glad to hear you have a new love.

I have been writing stories in LadyC's Story Challenges.  You might enjoy trying out a story or two;  you could write it as a poem, I think.



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« Reply #168 on: January 22, 2008, 08:33:18 PM »

This is just a poem I wrote a little while ago and thought I'd post it.

Sloppy Stitches
With every slanted latter I etch on fish wielding puffins
A small part of my soul disappears
Yet with your two dozen sloppy signs on paper
Sent in a bottle across the ocean
My soul is patched – knitted
By your pen strokes
Never straight or neat, but always strong enough

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« Reply #169 on: January 23, 2008, 07:29:47 PM »

Pamela~ yes it is mr. pyo's loss-lol =P

Prissy~ sorry to disappoint you, but mr. rymal turned out to be a pathetic jerk so we're not together anymore

Everyone~ i'm working on a poem as we speak, which i shall post next time along with my usual commentary on the poem =]

<3 yuki
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« Reply #170 on: February 19, 2008, 08:07:15 PM »

Greetings Fellow Poets and/or Claymaniacs~

As promised, I have a new poem for you guys~enjoy =]

Untitled

I can never find the right words
My dear
But I will do my very best
For you are well worth the effort
You make me feel so...
Alive
On my way home last night
I was laughing and crying
At the same time
Laughing because you make me
So happy
Crying because I wanted
More than anything
To follow you home
So that I could
Spend the rest of the night
With you
And wake up next to you
In the morning
But I couldn't
I can't stop thinking about
How it felt to have your arm
Around me
And it was sweet of you
To try to keep my hands warm
Speaking of warmth
I get a warm feeling inside
Every time I see you
In fact
I can't even think about you
Without smiling
I think I'm...
Falling in love with you

Comments: This is for my boyfriend Cesar <3 He's sooo great =] Any ideas for a title?

~Yuki


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« Reply #171 on: March 10, 2008, 07:16:16 PM »

Hello Mates~

Another poem for my Cesar...

Although these words are not my own
At times it is best
To let those who are more articulate
Roll the perfect diction
Off of our tongues
(It's ok, just write it)
I love you more
Than i could ever promise

Comments~ The words "I love you more than I cold ever promise" are from "The Way I Am" by Ingrid Michaelson, its such a good song!
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« Reply #172 on: March 18, 2008, 04:51:05 PM »

Greetings Everyone =]

I have a new poem~yay!

I'm all yours dear
For as long as you'd like me to be yours
My heart is filled with love for you
I've never felt this way about someone before
(Ever)
My body completely succumbs to you
When you kiss me
Especially when you don't stop
And I can't think about anything else
Or feel anything else
I've never been very spiritual
But I think my soul hearts you too
I could write you hundreds of poems
Give you thousands of kisses
Admire how exquisite you are
Millions of times
None of it would be enough to express
Just how soft my soft spot is for you

~Yuki
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Prissy
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« Reply #173 on: March 18, 2008, 05:44:35 PM »

Hello!

I haven't been here in a while.  So many threads some times it's hard to get to a majority of them.

Yukino,
Always love your poems.  You are able to express your feelings so well.  Maybe Cesar for the title?

Writer365
Very interesting and unusual poem.  I enjoyed it.

Hugs,
Prissy
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« Reply #174 on: March 19, 2008, 08:36:15 PM »

Thank you Prissy =] Perhaps I shall call the poem "Cesar" since I wrote it for him-lol =]

~Yukino
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« Reply #175 on: November 30, 2008, 11:09:03 AM »

i don't have a poem this time, but i just wanted to say "hello" to my fellow claymaniacs/poets =] i love you guys!
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