The Poet's Corner

[geraldine]

         "FOUND MY WAY"

I found my way here through Clay,
Claymaniacs have shown me the way
to find friends who have become a part of my life everyday.
Before I came here I never knew how many would become so dear.
So, I thank you Clay, for helping me find "The Way"!

[ydebi]

awe Charlene...nice poem.....debi

[yukino]

Hey Everbody!

[yukino]

Sorry about that, my computer  is being stupid...let's try this again

Greetings Fellow Poets!

     I have finally written another poem-yay!  Here it is-Enjoy!

The curtains parted
Your voice filled the room
And my soul with joy
The sound was so beautiful
Words cannot properly convey it
As you performed in your white tux
I became convinced that you really are an angel
By the end of your Christmas serenade
I knew that I had fallen for you even more
When you began visiting with the audience
Hearing you speak
And watching you smile and laugh
Made me heart sing
You, my dear Clay
Make everthing groovy

Love,
Yukino

p.s. This poem was inspired by my November 11th concert experience, the song "Wild Thing" and my undying love for Mr. Clayton Aiken 

[claytonsmyccf]

pointless school girl crush

so much hurt in those eyes
So much love too...

I can't choose.
Which one is pulling me in,
both have great strength
but which one has the most I do not know

growing closer and closer to you
Is this somethin that I really choose?
Do you have control over me
I think, yes you do

I'm falling harder
falling deeper
Is this love or hate
I'm smiling brighter with happiness
or is this an expression of fear?

I cry and cry over again
For others do not see
for this is inside
Deep down where these feelings hide.

These feeling must stay hidden
every laugh must be covered
every look must not be caught
no trail of clues left behind

For this is not excepted to continue on,
A school girl crush!
That which should never be known
For it holds no future...

[claytonsmyccf]

another one just had to type it up

Poem told through the eyes of someone who has experienced a moment at a concert like this. If you have then it will make sense to you.

A gift to you
I stood there watching,
Not a thing to say,
You crying up there,
Us showing you we care.

Sweet Voice sudenly cracks,
Beautiful song isn't wrecked,
Whispers pass around,
He's beautiful even now.

No one want to go,
For we managed to touch somethin,
Somethin deep down inside,
Somethin that can't be done again!

[Prissy]

Geraldine,
I enjoyed your poem.  It's fun to rhyme with "Clay."

Yukino,
Another beautiful poem.  You express your feelings so well!!

Kimmy,
I'm so impressed with your poems, too.  How wonderful to be able to put into words your deepest thoughts and feelings.

All of you are great!  Keep up the good work!!
Hugs,
Prissy

[yukino]

Prissy, thanks so much for the compliment, I thrive on those-lol! Clay was just so amazing that I had to write about it! 

Great poems peoples! Love them, love them, love them! I feel honored to post my work amongst such talented poets  

[yukino]

Wow... No one has posted anything for awhile! I have two poems that I found scribbled on the back of some Spanish notes and hope you guys enjoy them 

Post-Thanksgiving Blues

I'm so full of turkey, I'm going to burst
It's freezing outside ('tis scarf season again)
To make matters worse
I'm sitting in a desk that is brown
And confines me to work
That makes me frown
But, I have you to think of
My darling Clay
You never fail to brighten my day

Comments: I wrote this one the day I got back to school from Thanksgiving vacation. I was bored to death in Spanish and decided to express how I was feeling at the moment and to try rhyming for once. I like my free-verse poems better.

Untitled

I'm always imagining
What it would be like
If I could hold you close
And make everthing alright
I wish I could be your angel
Who takes away the pain

Comments: This is another free-verse, romantic poem like I usually write. It's inspired by an Aerosmith song that goes "Baby you're my angel/Come and save me tonight/ You're my angel/Come and make it alright..." I want to be the person who "makes it alright" for this guy that I'm in love with.

[Prissy]

Yukino,

I really liked your Thanksgiving poem and the second one reminded me of what Clay is going through now with the tabloids.   I always enjoy reading your poems.

Hugs,
Prissy

[claytonsmyccf]

Have another one

haha mostly the problems with love and how sometimes love no matter what can't be. Seems to be a trend with my life poems lately.


Just Mine...

I'm sick of myself for hating her,
I'm tired of wanting to cry when I see her with you,
I'm scared of her loving you,
I'm scared of you loving her FOR REAL!

I'm scared of her changing you,
I'm scared of you changing for her,
I'm scared of you being hers,
I'm jealous just thinking of her holding YOU!

I don't want to hate her 'cause its stupid,
I don't want to cry 'cause I'm stupid,
I don't want to think about IT,
I just wanna stay in this world of mine where you'll always be,
JUST MINE....

[yukino]

Awww, thank you Prissy, you always make me feel special when you say nice things about my poems =) And claytonsmyccf, I know this sounds cheesy but, I kind of understand what you're going through. I know I could never be with Clay and I don't deserve him but, I'll be so jealous when he gets a girlfriend-lol!

Love,
Yuki

[Prissy]

kimmy,

You are really good at expressing your feelings.  I can remember how it feels to really care about someone and the love is not returned.  Guess what?  This feeling will not last and you will love someone else. (Or were you referring to Clay??)

Hugs to you.
Prissy

 

[yukino]

Prissy, I love that pic of Clay you posted with the hearts around it-SO CUTE! and Claytonsmyccf, good luck with your unrequitted-loveness; I know it sucks but, hang in there k?

Love,
Yukino

[yukino]

Greetings Fellow Poets!

    I have another poem for ya'll-enjoy! 


The thought of counting the freckles on your face
Causes my mouth to curve into a grin
And my thoughts to wander through outer space
Looking into your eyes must be a sin
For they are seemingly endless pools of verdant
Your full, shell-pink lips are so kissable
I certainly wouldn’t be nonchalant
If my own got to make contact with them
That, I’m afraid, is not permissible
Because you are unaware that I exist
I am just another fan letter to you
Some teeny-bopper that won’t cease to persist
But, I hope someday, my wish shall come true
And you’ll have knowledge of my love for you

Comments: This is a sonnet I had to do for English class and its about OMC of course-that sexsi beast! It was difficult because there has to be a certain amount of syllables in each line and there has to be fourteen lines, etc. - crazyness!

Love,
Yukino

[Prissy]

Yukino,

Your sonnet is beautiful.  And I remember  from English literature in school, that a sonnet is 14 lines and has prescribed syllables.  You did a great job.

Hugs,
Prissy

[yukino]

Awww, shucks Prissy, muchas gracias!  I like the part about counting the freckles-yay! God should have graced every man with freckles!

Love,
Yukino

[yukino]

Greetings Fellow Poets!

     When they redid Claymaniacs, I couldn't find this forum at first and I was like "Omg! my poems, what's happened to them!" They're still here so it's all good-yaaaaay! =) In fact, I have two new ones! 

Love Poem

I want to pull you close to me
So close that there would be no space between us
And I could feel the warmth of your body
I want to hold you tight
But not too tight, in a tender way, I suppose
I want to kiss your lips, know their taste, and what they feel like
Above all, I want to tell you something
I want you to know that I love you
Truly, madly, deeply
I love you


Loving

Initially awkward yet tender kisses
Passionate kisses
Caressing, touching
Loving
Undone buttons
Clothes slide to the floor
Tangled up in each other
Loving
Cuddling under the covers
Loving


Comments: I love the first one, 'tis very sweet =) The second one is so-so, I dunno... tell me what y'all think-k?

Love,
Yukino

[Prissy]

Yukino,

I like both of your poems very much.  What do you think of this new "Lounge?" 

Prissy

[yukino]

Thank you Prissy! Yeah, I like the new Lounge, its pretty cool =) Here's my latest piece everyone!

You

Rainwater droplets form and make their journey down the glass
The glass of my refuge from the damp gloom
Yet, my thoughts remain joyous
For they are of you


Love,
Yukino