The Poet's Corner

[tamaraluvs]

This is the first time I've been here and Yukino I must say I love your work! 

Bravo!!

[Prissy]

Yukino,

I'm sorry I haven't been here in a while.  Great poems as always.  Did you know about the Clay Poetry contest on Valentine's Day?  You had to use only words from  A Thousand Days.  Our very own Claymanaic, Cindy, won the contest.  She got a phone call from Clay!

Here is Cindy's poem:

I believe in angels
Cause I believe in you
Way down in your soul
Your light shines through

When you reach out for me
I just drown in your eyes
Like a thousand spinning lights
Seen up in the skies

You're the man that I love
All my days and my nights
You're my sun and my moon
For your love I would fight

A promise to you
Said back in the start
Your love I will hold
Right home in my heart

Cause I believe in angels
And I believe in you

[yukino]

Hey Guys!

     I haven't been on here in forever-omg!( Due to a lack of inspiration-lol =P ) Anyway, here's my latest masterpiece:

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The way you make me feel, my darling
Is amazing
When I'm with you
I feel as though I could float
And when you hug me
I don't want you to let go
At this moment, I'm missing you
Your smile, your laugh
Everything about you that I adore
Are you thinking of me?
Do you imagine what it would be like
To see me again
To hold and kiss me?
Thoughts of seeing you again
Of holding and kissing you
Consume me

xoxoxo,
Yuki 

[tamaraluvs]

Yuki............. that was a great one!!

You are very talented!!

[redhotclay]

Okay, nobody throw tomatoes 

Here's one of mine from December '06

Eight Thousand Miles

 

Eight thousand miles
The space between you and I
But just a breath away and you're here
The heat and the life, everything that I need

Eight thousand miles
The sea drowns all our fears
Wash me, wrap me with your body
Filling the empty chasm in my soul

Eight thousand miles
The mountains of circumstance
We walk a perilous and unknown path
To see, to feel, to know
The flames guide our every step

Eight thousand miles
Vast plains stretch the endless moments
We live for the words, the voice that penetrates
Deep within, the truth reveals

Eight thousand miles
I'm waiting on your shore
My tears can't hide the rush
Your breath enters mine
We live and die in a moment, for a lifetime

Eight thousand miles
The space between you and I
We are joined
Unspeakable and unbreakable
No time and no place

Just Love

[tamaraluvs]

 

Susan...............you are a great poet!!

[stephen]

yes susan
always loved that one

[stilldreaming]

That's really beautiful Susan!   

[redhotclay]

thank you tammy, cindy, and stephen        

[Pamela]

Susan, that was lovely.  So romantic, and full of yearning and hope.

 

[LadyC]

Yuki - You know I'm a huge fan.  Love the new masterpiece, and glad to see you're back to writing.  I truly believe you have a gift.  It's beautiful, as always.

Susan - Your poem is lovely!  So expressive and descriptive, it paints a verbal picture of what you're feeling.  It's very beautiful.  Thank you for sharing it with us.

[redhotclay]

thank you Kris 

[writer365]

I'd really like some opinions and responses to some of my poetry. Thanks!
(hey, the way I figure it, there's no better way to make friends than by bearing your soul, right?)

The first one's called Rapture

I cannot say
what makes me feel this way
your green eyes speak
and I can't help but listen
your lips move
but make no sound
sloppy-written words
in sloppy-written letters
mean everything
and yet
say nothing to someone
who is not listening
your green eyes speak
and I can't help but listen

[writer365]

Here's another. This has been one of my favorites for a long time.

Wings

How I'd love
To crawl into your soul
To discover your secrets
To see emotions untold

How I'd love
To unmask your smile
To see it's true light
To know if it's worth the fight

How I'd love
To gaze into your eyes
To find out what they're hiding
To know every tear you cry

How I'd love
To be held in your arms
To know that you'll protect me
To find you set me free

[tamaraluvs]

Tory they are both really great poems!!

I especially love the second one....

Wings

How I'd love
To crawl into your soul
To discover your secrets
To see emotions untold

How I'd love
To unmask your smile
To see it's true light
To know if it's worth the fight

How I'd love
To gaze into your eyes
To find out what they're hiding
To know every tear you cry

How I'd love
To be held in your arms
To know that you'll protect me
To find you set me free

This one is so beautiful!! 

[writer365]

Thanks! I love that one too. I wrote it a while ago and it just seems to keep growing on me

[tamaraluvs]

Thanks! I love that one too. I wrote it a while ago and it just seems to keep growing on me

I can HONESTLY say that I can relate to that one!

I do not write poems, I write FF myself!

[writer365]

I understand where you're coming from. I write fiction too. I'm working on a FF, but it's still kind of in the works.

[yukino]

Thanks for the feedback LadyC =P You're so nice!  (I love this cute little piggy by the way) So yeah, here's another one:

At this moment
I would do anything
If I could see your face
If I could hold you
For just a few seconds
My heart would rejoice

xoxoxo,
Yukino

[Pamela]

At this moment
I would do anything
If I could see your face
If I could hold you
For just a few seconds
My heart would rejoice

Yukino, beautiful as always.  Which reminds me...where is that Clay Aiken anyway??!?!?!



I'm glad you got inspired again!